Suggestion by April, write a magazine article. Comments please.

April Smith, on the UBC wrote her Post #8- Love to write?!!? Turn it into passive income!
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April then suggested writing articles for e-zines and gave this site http://ezinearticles.com/

I checked it out, joined up and have written an article. Now, I don't know if this is the sort of thing that an e-zine would be interested in. Do any of you know? April, do you have any ideas on this?

If you could spare a couple of minutes to read it and comment, I would be pleased. This is what I would like to know:
1. Did you find it interesting?
2. Is this the sort of information you would expect to find in an e-zine?
3. What changes would you make, or what suggestions do you have? Any feedback willingly accepted.
4. Is the writing good enough? I have a chatty style of writing rather than an academic one.
5. Should it be fully justified or ragged edges on the right?

Here is what I have written. The guidelines suggest 400 to 700 words, but can be up to 5,000.  This is 825 words.  The guidelines say we can suggest they go to our website.

Take the plunge – become an ESL teacher in China

I was in a rut, bored, suffering from empty nest syndrome, getting close to retirement age and was in need of ‘an adventure’.  To have a ‘real’ adventure my husband and I decided to go to China and teach English.

This was totally out of character for us, we loved to travel, but even so, going to a country like China, which was basically an unknown, was seen as something rather radical. Nevertheless, we researched the possibilities and decided we would go.

We had no teaching experience or qualifications. So we attended a local TESOL college, studied for the next three months, passed our exams and were awarded our qualifications. This gave us access to work in thousands of schools and universities in China.

ESL stands for English as a Second Language. Another acronym is TESOL, Teachers of English to Speakers of Other Languages. Even though our English was very good, we knew it was going to be a totally new ball game for us.

Both my husband and I were trained public speakers, confident, had raised five children, were well read and had an excellent general knowledge base. This, along with the training and teaching manuals we received proved to be adequate resources.

To find a suitable job, we searched the internet. There are many sites these days where recruiting agents advertise teaching jobs in China. But when we did this, in 2005, it was more or less up to us to find the jobs.  However one of the websites was huge, with job boards for all the different Asian countries and we found thousands of teaching jobs advertised. Where to go was the next problem, after all, most of the names meant nothing to us; we didn't even know where these places were.

Eventually we settled on a university in Fujian Province, where the weather seemed similar to our home town, and the city was not too big. We were a bit worried about getting lost in a huge city, when we couldn't speak a word of Chinese and we didn't know how much English would be spoken there.

We planned everything very carefully. We packed what we thought we might need, and with our heads full of dreams and ideas for teaching we had a goodbye party and took the jet stream to China. We planned to have four days holiday first, to get our heads around being in such a new environment.

Was it a good idea? It was a fabulous idea. Where there problems? Of course! The first major problem reared its ugly head as we were leaving the airport having just touched down. Being super organised I had printed off the hotel’s address in Chinese. We were horrified to find that none of the taxi drivers could read Chinese! If they couldn't read Chinese there wasn't much hope of finding English speaking people. After a long, frustrating and temper raising experience with several taxi drivers, a security officer, and a help desk lady that spoke almost no English, we made it to our hotel, only to find out I had printed all the instructions in Japanese! What an idiot!

Staff from our new university collected us after our four day holiday, and took us to our new home. It was about 2 hours from the coast, way up in the mountains. We had to go through endless tunnels on the road. Hot, tired, and with a monumental headache I arrived at the campus.

Students were delegated to drag our bags up the six flights of stairs to our apartment. There were no elevators here, and we got very fit going up and down those stairs several times a day. We puffed up after them to find ourselves in a three bed-roomed apartment with a view over the city to the mountains.

We were left to unpack and rest, with instructions that we were to meet the other teachers at the school gate at 6pm and they would take us out to dinner.

We sat on the bed, my husband and I, and grinned at each other like school kids let out for the holidays.

‘Well, we came for an adventure, we’re going to get it,’ my husband said.

He was right. That year became a life changing experience, for us, and for the wonderful students we taught.

If you’re bored, in a rut, can free yourself for a year or so, why don’t you consider taking the plunge too? Teach English in China. It will be one of the most rewarding and exciting things you could do.

If you would like to read more about this topic and our experiences, go to www.englishstoriesforfun.com 

If I am allowed to add pictures I would include these.

Our apartment was on the top floor.

Looking over part of the city.

Looking towards the west. The sun would set behind these mountains in a a great haze of orangey red.

 I don't know why the font is different sizes in this post, in my Word doc it is fine.
Your comments would be appreciated.  Thanks.